tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12751012.post1326135004561434442..comments2024-03-28T14:32:11.095+13:00Comments on today is my birthday!: Worst Poem EverIT IS ALLYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07854190246186613066noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12751012.post-14463793163460033322010-07-16T03:53:44.741+12:002010-07-16T03:53:44.741+12:00I like that poem actually. You sure you get it?I like that poem actually. You sure you get it?Traceyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00776334167836330364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12751012.post-26184316964321818422010-07-14T20:44:06.806+12:002010-07-14T20:44:06.806+12:00Do you critics even know what XXXX is? I thought ...Do you critics even know what XXXX is? I thought it was a very clever poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12751012.post-76321907810687588312010-07-13T10:13:07.260+12:002010-07-13T10:13:07.260+12:00personally I think it was amazing and I am in no d...personally I think it was amazing and I am in no doubt that it was written by a girl, given the mataphors and language used. I bet shes hot too!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12751012.post-6244656355980007702010-07-13T03:14:49.763+12:002010-07-13T03:14:49.763+12:00Yeah, that poem was like, a joke.
Nobody gets my ...Yeah, that poem was like, a joke.<br /><br />Nobody gets my genius.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12751012.post-51252640876550520072009-12-01T11:54:45.632+13:002009-12-01T11:54:45.632+13:00This was written by a bloke.. or a gal that thinks...This was written by a bloke.. or a gal that thinks like a bloke.. either way 'shite'<br /><br />The give away is the line about Rudd.. using this as a reason to not finish to soon.. instead of Tantra<br /><br />I think Tantra may have helped not just the poem but the Blokessa that wrote it.<br /><br />This poem drew you to a previous discussions with a working girl... which line brought this forward to your mind?<br /><br />'She lays, her body compliant as clay<br />And softly her mind drifts to thoughts of decay.'<br /><br />She is a sack of spuds & she thinks about death... I hope not all working girls/guys are feeling like this.. they should get a new job (so to speak)<br /><br />P.S. I think I know the crazy lookin biker you Haiku'd.. cool bike... odd blokeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17623360210741331105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12751012.post-86431999375920435592009-12-01T10:21:55.187+13:002009-12-01T10:21:55.187+13:00I can't write poems, but if I could, I totally...I can't write poems, but if I could, I totally do better than that!<br /><br />I agree with Andrea. Sex + Kevin Rudd = WTF!? o.O<br /><br />Speaking of bad writing, I'm assuming you've already seen this: http://www.stuff.co.nz/entertainment/books/3113485/Boiled-egg-metaphor-scoops-bad-literary-sex-awardHollyhttp://adventuresofholly.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12751012.post-61573867053960759442009-12-01T08:27:09.791+13:002009-12-01T08:27:09.791+13:00Yes...more than the poem, I was concerned about th...Yes...more than the poem, I was concerned about this Kevin Rudd business.<br /><br />Also, entry level position. Heh.<br /><br />Heh.Alysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05318995922395308120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12751012.post-71613909426651494412009-12-01T08:05:10.264+13:002009-12-01T08:05:10.264+13:00I'm concerned that Kevin Rudd pops into the gu...I'm concerned that Kevin Rudd pops into the guy's mind when he's having sex.<br /><br />Has he SEEN Kevin Rudd?<br /><br />Or is it Clever Social Commentary?Andrea Eameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15304706719936895188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12751012.post-46616951137632730632009-12-01T01:33:16.832+13:002009-12-01T01:33:16.832+13:00That poem is the story of how I lost my virginity!...That poem is the story of how I lost my virginity!!*<br /><br /><br /><br /><i>*(except that's it's not)</i>Joffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15639186178237969660noreply@blogger.com